Monday, November 21, 2011

Remember...That Rainy day!

I'm outside standing here thinking to myself "why am i here?" There's a little breeze with rain drops falling down, racing down my face. Goose bumps all down my arms, making me feel like i can't breath. Cars driving by splashing water with horns beeping.  Thinking to myself "Why am I walking?" I'm mad but can't do anything about it. Calling people on my iphone but can't get a hold of anyone. The weight of the water makes me drag my feet, making my feet numb up. My arms are heavy swinging back and forth. Can't move my fingers but still striving forward to get to my destination.

2 comments:

  1. nice writing, kelepi.

    the image evokes much of the feeling in your writing.

    you have some inappropriate photos posted on your blog.

    your blog url has a drug reference id like you to change. ask me in class and ill show you how,

    youre making progress, kelepi. stick with it.

    cg

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  2. also.....

    you need to change your comment settings to moderated. this is required!

    and you need to turn off the word verification.

    ask me to show you how.

    cg

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